Extension: go onto another class's blog and comment on their learning too.
Imagine you are Lila living in the hot, dry, sandy desert.
What can you see around you?
What can you feel?
What can you smell?
What can you hear?
What can you taste?
How do you feel?
Make sure you use excellent, powerful verbs, adjectives, connectives and wonderful sentence openers!
Good luck.
Miss Alexander and Mr Cusack.
I feel soft sand under my feet. I can see a great big hill.I feel hot air going up my body. I can smell hot air. I feel burning hot.
ReplyDeleteBy Finlay.
If i was her i would feel the sandy ground. I would see a big sun. I would smell stale air. I would feel hot and sad.
ReplyDeleteBy Zahra
On Sunday I went to Colchester Zoo, I saw lots off animals like Penguins,Tigers, Seals,Elephants,Goats,Horse,Pigs.I saw same statols off animals.I loved
ReplyDeletethis day to spend my day with my family.
By Kotryna
In the desert there are mountains of dry golden sand the sun is burning my feet. I can feel sweat on my body and I hear the whistling and hot air burning my ears, now I am thirsty. I also feel happy but I want it to rain so Lila and I can plant some giant crops. I want to ride on the bumpy camel back home.
ReplyDeleteBy Ayden
I can see lots of sand and really dry trees, the grass and mountain.
ReplyDeleteI feel very hot and sweaty. The sand is very hot under my feet.
I can hear the wind blowing the sand.
I cannot taste or smell anything as I am alone in the desert.
I am hungry and very thirsty and i want some water.
Pranay 2C
I can see loads of golden yellow sand and lots of bare trees everywhere. The burning sun is bouncing on my body as I walk through the dry desert. I can hear the sand scrunching under my feet and it scratches them. OUCH!!! Gritty crunchy sand blows in my mouth. The smell of the hairy yucky camels in disgusting!!! The boiling sun is making me tired and I feel like crying because I feel so lonely.
ReplyDeleteBy Edie
I feel the boiling sun on my head. The sand is everywhere. It smells dry and I am thirsty.
ReplyDeleteBy Freya Holder - Y2C
I can see sand all around me and i can feel the wind blowing the sand all over me.
ReplyDeleteI can smell the burning hot sun and hear the wind blowing the sand everywhere. I can taste food because i am hungry and i feel upset.
by Jameal
All around me I see nothing but sand and a few trees. I can feel crunchy sand under my feet. The leaves from the tree smell very fresh. All I can hear is my own weeping, I can taste my salty tears. I am worried that it whont rain.
ReplyDeleteI can feel the burning sun,I can see the big camel and also I can hear the sound of the wind,I can smell the hot air around me and i feel very hot.
ReplyDeleteBy Abel
Up above me there is a gigantic sun and it's burning my skin. It's so hot I want to lie down. My mouth is to dry to even taste anything. I feel so sad about this village.
ReplyDeleteby Matthew
I can see a huge gigantic sun . I can see tall mountains . I can see the sky changing colour . I can smell awful sandy sand .I can hear animals making noises because they are very hungry . I can feel brown scary trees . What I can see around me is a is a sandy dusty boring village . By harry machovas
ReplyDeleteIf I was Lila, I would see lots of hot and dry sand all around me. I would feel the bright sun beaming on my skin wich would make me feel very hot. I would also see great big mountains which i would climb to tell the sky the saddest thing i know.When the rain falls i will hear thunder and see lightening. I would feel very happy when it rains beacuse the rain would feel like my mummys kisses.
ReplyDeleteI feel happy being in the desert, I can see sand, I can smell the hungry camels, I can hear the wind blowing in the sky, I can taste the water which I brought with me, I can feel the sun on my face and on my back.
ReplyDeleteBy Anthony
I can see blue sky and lots of sand. I can smell dusty sand. I can feel burning hot sun. I can hear camels walking down the desert. I taste sand coming in my mouth.
ReplyDeleteBy Aman
Outside my home all I can see is the big yellow sun beating down heat , drying up the land around us . I can almost taste the dusty sand in the air ! There's nothing for us to eat ! I feel tired and sad, I wish for rain to come and make everything nice again !
ReplyDeletemaddison 1st october 2013
ReplyDeletei can see lots of sand and the hot hot sun there is also trees ahead of me.I can feel the hot sand it is burning my feet ouch! I I can smell my skin burning and my sweat dripping off of me.I cant hear much i am alone and scared and miss my family.I can taste the sand in my mouth i need water it is soo hot,i am lonely and scared.
Laura-Jane 9 October 2013
ReplyDeleteI see lots of sand and the sun is burning hot. It feels as dry as a sandy beach. i can't see anything, but I hear the wind blowing. I feel boiling hot.
In our class a few days ago we did the same homework like 2.C and i'm in 2.A
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